丹霞小学    六年一班    郑诗婷

     Hello. My name is Lily. I have a new foreign teacher. His name is Tai. He is from Canada. He is a good teacher. He can speak English very well. He can also speak Mandarin and Cantonese, too.

     Tai is 180 cm tall. I am 155 cm tall. He is taller than me. Tai is stronger and fatter than me. He has a big nose and yellow hair. He is always smiling. He often wears his green jacket with a black and white cap. He likes playing football and basketball. He is funny and smart. He is active and kind. He likes playing games with us.

     All of our classmates like Tai very much. His English class is full of fun. It is funny and active. We can learn a lot from him. If you want to make friends with Tai, please come to BOB and let’s have English class together.

教师点评：小作者通过介绍外国老师 Tai , 表达对外国老师的喜爱之情，并且运用形容词比较级，描述自己和外国老师外貌的不同，看得出小作者的语法基础扎实，语言功底不错。