Hello, boys and girls. My English name is Andy. My Chinese name is Chen Pei Le. I am a boy. I am twelve. I am a good student. I study in Jin Long Primary School. I am in Class 6, Grade 5.I am tall and strong. I am active and kind. I have short and black hair. My eyes are big and my ears are small. My face is round and my mouth is pink.. I am very lovely.

      My favourite colour is black. I like my black jacketa with blue jeans. My favourite food is hor dogs, because it's healthy and yummy. My favourite fruit is watermelon, because it’s juicy and red. My favourite day is Thurday. We have P.E., computer and English. But my favourite subject is English. I like Miss Zhang very much. Shew is our English teacher. Her English Class is so much fun.

   I go to school from Monday to Friday. I am helpful at home. I can sweep the floor. I can water the flowers. But I can’t cook. This is me. Do you like me ? Do you want to make friends with me?

                                                                          汕头市金龙小学 506 班 陈培乐

                                                                                              指导老师 邱海莉

指导老师点评：小作者通过介绍自己的外貌、性格和爱好，表达他想结交朋友的美好愿望。并且能够运用自己的学过的句型，学以致用，行文舒畅，看出小作者的英语基础扎实。