Hi, friends. My English name is Steven. My Chinese name is Lin Tengyang. I am a lovely boy. I study in Dong Xia Primary School. I am in the Class One, Grade Six. I go t school on foot, because my home is near the school. I have a happy family. Come and meet my family, please.

 There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My mother is nurse. She works in a big hospital. She is very busy at work. She goes to work by motorcycle. She usually   goes to bed at ten o’clock. She sleeps very early because she is tired. She like collecting stamps. She is has a lot of stamps. They are from America, Canada and Hong Kong . My father is a doctor. He works in a small hospital. He goes to work by car. He likes reading books,too. He works very hard.

 My parents are kind but strict with me. They often help me with lessons. They love me . And I love them, too. This is my happy family. Welcome to my family.

                                                                              汕头市东厦中学 601 班    林腾阳

                                                                                                     指导老师    邱海莉

  指导老师点评：小作者通过介绍自己的家庭情况，表达了对父母的爱戴之情。文章行文舒畅，首尾呼应，而且小作者能熟练运用一般现在时第三人称单数形式动词的变化，可以看出他的英语功底不错。