Hello, every one. I am Jessica. I am your good friend. I live in Shantou. Shantou is my hometown.

Shantou is a big city. It is near over the sea. Look! There are two bridges over the sea. Look! There are two bridge over the sea. One is Haiwan Bridge. It’s powerful. The other one is Queshi Bridge. It’s nice. There are many tall building in Shantou, too. They look like the pearl of Shantou. There are four parks in Shantou, Zhongshan Park is very big. Jinsha Park is beautiful. Huaqiao Park is warm. Xiuhu Park is cool. You can run, play , sit in the park.\

The four seasons are good in Shantou. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Fall is cool and beautiful. Winter is cold in our city. I like my hometown-Shantou. Do you like Shantou?

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