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    On   June 1^st, I go to the zoo with my good friends. In the zoo, there’re many flowers and trees near the road. The flowers are beautiful .They are colourful. The grass is green. The trees are green, too. They are tall. In the zoo, there are many people. They are happy. Because they can see many animals. Here are many monkeys. They are cute. They’re jumping and swinging. They’re happy. I give some bananas to the monkey. But it says:” Don’t feed the animals!” And then. I go to the big farm. There are many sheep. They are white. They are beautiful.

Look. The pandas are over there. The pandas have two blacks eyes. They’re black and white. They are cute. They are walking on the grass . They are good climbers. They are happy. I am happy,too. Because pandas are my favourte animals. I like them .The lion is sleeping. The kangaroo is eating. The fish are swimming. There are many animals in the zoo. But it’s 5:00pm. It’s time to go home. Bye-bye.

Kelly 老师点评：小作者能用英语把动物们的活动场面描述得惟妙

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