It was rainy. But we still went there. There were many students ithere .And we had two foreign teachers. They are Tai and Amender. We played two games .One is “ musical chair ” , another is “ limbogame ” .Everyone enjoyed the games very actively. I won the games. I was smart. After the games, we ate hamburgers, French Fries and chickens. At last, we sang a song. The name called “ if you happy and you know it clap your hands”. And we played happily.

     This was Bob English Salon. We had a good time. I liked this Salon very much.

                                  Shi Mao Experimental School

Class 3,Grade 5      Shane. 苏泽浩

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