汕头金珠小学603班 张擎南
Hello, every one. I am Jessica. I am you good friend. I live in Shantou. It is a beautiful city.
Shantou is a big city. It is near the sea. Look! There are two bridges over the sea. One is Haiwan Bridge. It’s powerful. One is Queshi Bridge. It’s nice. There are many tall buildings Shantou, too. They look like the pearls of Shantou. There are three parks in Shantou, too. Zhongshan Park is very big. Jinsha Park is beautiful. Huaqiao Park is warm. And, Xinhu Park is cool. You can run, play, sit in the park.
The four seasons are good in Shantou. Spring is warm, summer is hot, fall is cool and beautiful, winter is cold of our city. I like my city-Shantou. Do you Shantou?
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人的公园等优美风光，抒发热爱汕头，建设家
乡的思想感情。
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